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18 November 2010 @ 05:54 pm
ficlet: underneath the stars  
Title: Underneath the Stars
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing/Character(s): Clark/Oliver
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: all characters belong to CW/DC Comics
Word Count: 456
Spoilers/Warnings: none/slash
Summary: Clark and Oliver's first kiss.
Author's Notes: For my theechochorus table, prompt: kiss

Their first kiss was nothing like Clark thought it would be. Considering the dangerous lives they led, Clark had always imagined it would take place during some near death type situation. He would’ve been wrong.

It was actually the exact opposite. Clark had been in Smallville over a weekend, needing a break from Metropolis. He liked the city, but it wasn’t home. That word would always used in reference to the farm.

Since it was a beautiful night, Clark decided to take it in from the rooftop of the farm. He was admiring the stars when the sound of an engine interrupted his thoughts. Sitting up, he saw an all too familiar green Porsche stop. A goofy smile spread across his face as Oliver stepped out, looking around.

“Oliver,” Clark called, gaining his attention. “Up here.”

Ollie looked up, and his lips curved into a smile, causing Clark’s heart to skip a beat. “Hi there.”

“Hey,” Clark replied. “If you want to come up, there’s a ladder on the side of the house.”

He got a nod in response, and Ollie disappeared from his view. A few minutes later, he showed up by his side. Clark moved to help him, and they both sat down once more.

“This is a nice view,” Oliver commented.

“That’s why I came up,” Clark explained. “It’s relaxing.”

“I can imagine,” Ollie agreed. “I hope I am not interrupting …”

“No, you’re good,” Clark assured him. Ollie grinned and Clark smiled back. “So, did you come all the way here because you missed me?” he added.

“Something like that,” Oliver replied, chuckling. “I went to your apartment and when I realized you weren’t there, I figured you came back to Smallville.”

“Must be pretty important then,” Clark noted.

“Not really,” Oliver said, shrugging. “I just … wanted to see you.”

“Oh,” was all Clark was able to come up with. He just stared at Ollie, eyes wide, taken aback by the simple declaration.

Brown eyes met green and Ollie smiled. “You know, you have beautiful eyes.”

“I do?” Clark said.

“Very,” Ollie confirmed. “You have no idea how many nights I’ve spent thinking about them. Clark was speechless as Oliver continued, “Then again, I just can’t stop thinking about you period.”

“I …,” Clark tried to speak but his mind was blank.

“If I kiss you right now, would you push me off this roof?” Oliver asked seriously.

“If you don’t kiss me, I might,” Clark said, finally regaining control of his facilities.

Oliver leaned forward and Clark closed the remaining distance, their lips meeting in a gentle kiss.

Though it may not have been how he expected, it was perfect all the same, and Clark certainly didn’t have any complaints.
 
 
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phoenixnzphoenixnz on November 19th, 2010 02:24 am (UTC)
Aww, that was so sweet. I love the line where Clark says if Oliver doesn't kiss him he might just push him off. Great story hon.
svgurl: clark/oliver once upon a timesvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:07 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!

I love the line where Clark says if Oliver doesn't kiss him he might just push him off.
I'm kind of fond of that line too so I'm happy it worked for you.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment!
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svgurl: clark/oliver kisssvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:32 pm (UTC)
I'm really happy to hear that you liked it. :)

they are so cute together
I can't argue with that!

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! :D
saavikam77: Clark/Ollie Miss Yousaavikam77 on November 19th, 2010 04:15 am (UTC)
Awwww.... ^____^

This was just perfectly sweet.
svgurl: clark/oliver kisssvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:39 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it! 'Sweet' was what I was going for. :)

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :D
charlie_jae: SV Clarkcharlie_jae on November 19th, 2010 06:33 am (UTC)
Awesome first kiss. I especially like speechless Clark :)
svgurl: clark/oliver once upon a timesvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:40 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it and the first kiss worked for you!

I especially like speechless Clark :)
I'm a fan of it myself, though I also enjoy an aggressive!Clark, I guess I just like Clark in all forms. ;)

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!
Raven Juneravenjune on November 19th, 2010 08:17 am (UTC)
Awww, this was so sweet <3

I absolutely loved this: “If I kiss you right now, would you push me off this roof?” Oliver asked seriously.

“If you don’t kiss me, I might,”.


svgurl: clark/oliver kisssvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:41 pm (UTC)
I am happy to hear that you liked it and that line worked for you. I am particularly fond of it myself.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :D
Babydracky: GA_Colliebabydracky on November 19th, 2010 12:33 pm (UTC)
Aww!!! This is just so lovely and so cute!! Kiss on a roof!♥
svgurl: clark/oliver kisssvgurl on November 19th, 2010 11:42 pm (UTC)
I am glad you liked it! I was trying to go for 'cute' and I could just imagine the kiss on the roof so I am happy it worked for you.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time comment! &hearts
Calcus: smallville; clark/ollie o is drunkcalcus on November 21st, 2010 10:33 am (UTC)
♥ This' so lovely. I liked the way that it wasn't dramatic or anything, it was almost like they'd been building to it for awhile. I liked it a lot. :D
svgurl: clark/oliver once upon a timesvgurl on November 22nd, 2010 08:31 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it! :)

I liked the way that it wasn't dramatic or anything, it was almost like they'd been building to it for awhile.
Yay! The table it's for requires that it be short so I figured I can just make it simple. I am relieved it worked for you. I was trying to make it feel like it had been building and I am happy that it worked out.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :)
souless_missessouless_misses on November 28th, 2010 12:19 am (UTC)
Oh my gosh!! it's been way too long since i've read your fics and i'm happy to be back here.

I've missed you're incredible writing and this wast just awesome and sweet. I'm actually re-reading all your fics again lol.

Great Job as always!
svgurl: clark/oliver once upon a timesvgurl on December 3rd, 2010 12:54 am (UTC)
Oh my gosh!! it's been way too long since i've read your fics and i'm happy to be back here.
&hearts Well I'm happy that you're happy to be here. :D

I've missed you're incredible writing and this wast just awesome and sweet. I'm actually re-reading all your fics again lol.
Aww, that's sweet of you to say. I'm flattered that you like my writing so much and are even rereading my stories! That totally made my day.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this particular fic. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave such sweet feedback! :D
Sammy: Jensen → Happylipssewnshut122 on November 30th, 2010 05:19 am (UTC)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! :D
svgurl: clark/oliver kisssvgurl on December 3rd, 2010 12:54 am (UTC)
That was the reaction I was going for! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. :D
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svgurl: clark/oliver once upon a timesvgurl on September 9th, 2011 07:43 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it! I like to write fluff now and then. :D

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment!